English creative writing

 During the warm dark summer comfy nights in Florida. My siblings and I loved playing outside on the street. We would always play hide and go seek tag. We would hide in the most random places. I would always hide behind a car and wait till they leave then hide somewhere else thinking it was a good idea but I would always get caught. Every night before we left our mum and dad would warn us about cars driving by and people walking around the street at night. Even though we had never had a problem playing outside at night we still got warned just in case. 

One night we had just finished my favorite meal ever Chinese we went outside to play. We had been outside for a while playing and giggling but it's now time to go inside. We get ready to go inside and we heard sounds across the street it sounded like people screaming but we didn't worry about it we thought it was probably just other kids playing outside. so we started to walk up what we thought was our driveway as we got closer to the door we started to notice things. We started to notice and a black car in the driveway and the house was green like a green tree. We just thought it was like that because it was night time.  We got to the door and knocked on it as it was locked a man came to the door, this man had black hair was 7 feet tall and was very strong like the hulk. We then realized we were in the wrong place but it was too late to turn back. We tried to scream but nothing came out of our mouths before we knew it we were in his house trapped in a room. My brother had his phone so he tried to call the police but for some reason, it wouldn't go throw we didn't know what to do we were trapped I noticed there was a little door behind the bed I wondered what it was. I whispered to my siblings “look over there it might be a way out of here” we went and looked we opened the door and it was a little vent I decided to go threw and have a look and where it goes to. I finally got to the end of the vent and noticed that it lead to the outside gutter on the roof. I had to just had to tell my siblings I thought to myself were free we can get out of here. I go back and tell them. One by one we climb through the vent and helped each other out. we then saw the guy through the window but he didn't see us. 

Once we got out of the vent we found a bush and hid till we thought it was safe to run we had been hiding in the bush for at least a few hours. we then decided that we should run we ran as far as we could but we couldn't see much as it was really dark. We had been running for a few hours and finally made it home once we got home we went inside and saw our parents in the living room we tried to tell them about what happened but they just didn't believe us they just kept saying don't be silly yous have been playing outside all night and yous are just tired that's why your coming up with these nonsense stories. We tried our best to make them believe us but they just didn't so we gave up and went to bed.